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Despite what may be very good intentions, written the wrong way, an employee appreciation note can go very wrong.  These letters:

  • Do not greet the recipient by name
  • Sound like they could be sent to en masse
  • Fail to clearly state why you are writing
  • Are written long after what is being acknowledged has happened
  • Are generic and formal
  • Do not show sincerity or say thank you

Thank you for helping with the new interns. We are working to expand our internship program and I’ll be working with Diane [parenthetically, this is her supervisor] in the coming months to brainstorm ideas on how we can do this. Once we have something concrete, we’ll let everyone know.
Sincerely,